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Lets talk about The Elemental Master

Tue May 19, 2009, 1:09 AM
I haven't updated my journal for a VERY long time, and for some reason I thought today (at 1:30 in the morning) would be good day to do it.

"So, you're going to talk about The Elemental Master?"

"Yes, I'm going to talk about TEM."

"What about it?"

"Well, for those of you who don't know, I'm going to give you the history of the Elemental Master and how it's become what it is today, and I'm going to explain what's currently happening with it."

"That sounds BORRRRRRRRING!"

"Yeah, it does."


A long time ago, a friend of mine, who goes by the nickname Zeltor Daeon, were taking a hike on a hill. I had picked up a blade of grass and started twirling around with it. After messing around with it for some time like it was a sword, I asked my friend how cool it would be to have the power to take a plant and be able to shape it into anything you could imagine with only the power of your mind. He thought that it would be awesome and we traded some idea's. The first seed was there.

Weeks later, I had gone to English class and was given a very simple assignment: write. And don't stop writing for ten minutes. DO NOT STOP WRITING UNLESS PEOPLE BEGIN TO DIE OR THE BUILDING IS ON FIRE. I believe that was an exact quote. Mr. Potts was bad ass, and still is to this day. So I did, and what did I write about? I wrote about an eleven year old who has the power to fight off evil with plants by manipulating them. That first piece of paper was lost forever, but that little seedling had begun to sprout.

I had been an avid reader for years, much more content to read a good book than to dribble a basket ball, and after that first writing exercise Mr. Potts gave us, I found that writing was both fun and addictive. I got a 70-page spiral notebook and filled the entire thing, finishing the entire original draft of The Elemental Master by the last page. The plot was what you would expect from a 14 year old: very simple and blunt, with one clear cut theme and not a lot of development. It was, to say the least, terrible. The idea was still good, though. So, a year later, I started from scratch. Version 2.0 was much better, with more developed characters and MUCH MUCH more plot. The main character, who always kept his simple yet effective name, Andrew Redroad, seemed to age as I did, and matured as well. Major plot elements were forming, six elements became eight. Major Character's changed names, the timeline became... workable.

By the time I was a sophomore in High School, I had rewritten TEM 5 times, two of those versions didn't make it past Chapter 10, which later became a running gag amongst my friends ("If you ever make it to Chapter 10 again, I'll give you a dollar!") "Spirit Worldians"(gag, I know), the alternative race in TEM, became "Andalicians", and a number of sophisticated connections and plot were begging to take shape. My little seedling was a small tree now.

Toward the end of my Senior year, I began to write Version 7.o. This is the latest and most up to date verion of The Elemental Master yet, and I believe it to be the most worthy. I look back at all those years that TEM has been a part of my life, and how it's evolved, and it's a good feeling. This will be the last version of the Elemental Master, unless I can't help it.

Now, I am 20 years old, I've been working on this project of mine for over a third of my life (intermittently), and I'm starting to feel a mix of dread and pride. I feel dread because I'm afraid that once I've finally finished it, that it still won't be polished enough to be published, and I'm proud because at the back of my head I know I have a really epic idea in this book.

So what am I doing with it now? Currently I'm on Chapter 12 (I got my damned dollar BTW!), but I've gone back to the beggining to polish parts and massively overhaul some areas of the story. Simply put, I want every word to be worth reading. I want every sentence to convey exactly what I want it to say. I'm on Chapter 2 of this massive revision.

That's my story, I hope you enjoy.

P.S. I have another love, and that's creating games. I'll talk about that next time ;)

  • Mood: Content
  • Listening to: 'New Begginings (No Guitar)' by Future World Music
  • Reading: Nothing
  • Watching: 'Let's Play Final Fantasy VII' by Necroscope86
  • Playing: Final Fantasy Tactics Advance 2
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Mountain Dew Code Red (FTW)

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  • Current Residence: Spokane, WA
  • Interests: Anime, Heroes, Star Trek, Star Wars, Harry Potter, Final Fantasy.
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  • Tools of the Trade: Keyboard, MS Word, large katanas, Mountain Dew

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:iconderelicy:
...gawd i was confused as to who this was for like 10 min. then i looked at your avi....:iconhurrplz:
:iconandrewredroad:
Hey man! I've heard distant reports of your work and saw you in the library a few days ago. I'd have said something but you seemed pretty into what you were doing. I moved back from Spokane a few months ago and now I'm in digital isolation. Reading a lot, and writing a lot. Sigh. Good to hear from you again.

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"But Baaltet is just a bucket of rocks!"
"... and I'll say 'Let them come!'"
:iconderelicy:
we all go through our trobles i suppose...but there always tomorrow...spokane wow...@_@
:icondarkwolfblade:
A common occurance just happen then suddenly KABOOM! Chuck Norris has released a roundhouse kick right infront of your house!

1) Run Away
2) Cover up with a blind fold
3) Spazz out with pocky in your mouth
4) Laugh like a maniac
5) Get togother with someone and do all the above!

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"When it is time to Yiff around, let me know!" DarkWolfBlade Production Studios 2009
:iconandrewredroad:
The funny part about alternate realities is that according to the theory of 10th dimensional strings, universes occur in infinite combinations in infinite diversity. So what does this mean in English? In some alternate reality, Chuck Norris really COULD roundhouse kick through a planet. Scary, huh?

--
"But Baaltet is just a bucket of rocks!"
"... and I'll say 'Let them come!'"
:icondarkwolfblade:
Quatum Physics and countless other relations. The fact of anti time vs time itself keeps a the wave at a high frequency that surround all demensions...

Thus we get the M theory...

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"When it is time to Yiff around, let me know!" DarkWolfBlade Production Studios 2009
:iconshimmortal:
thanks for the fave!

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Shia Mortalis

Every sorrow of the soul will read my name .
:iconandrewredroad:
Hey, definitely fav worthy! Nice work!

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"But Baaltet is just a bucket of rocks!"
"... and I'll say 'Let them come!'"
:iconcarthoris:
Thank you for the Klingon computer warning add. :)

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Dr. Venture: Why is it every time I need to get somewhere, we get waylaid by jackassery?
---The Venture Bros.


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:iconandrewredroad:
Hehe, it was too awesome to pass up. The only thing that could have made it better would have been something like a picture of a rubber duck with a slash through it where the Klingon crest is. If Klingons don't like tribbles, imagine what they'd think of rubber ducks!

--
"But Baaltet is just a bucket of rocks!"
"... and I'll say 'Let them come!'"

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